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for Embracing Darkness

by pegasus2704

person ancientgirl
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! I'm so glad he came for her.
person Avanell
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was my very first wendy/hook story that I read once I discovered this site...I'm so glad you've posted a ocuple of new chapters! Please keep writing this...and get Hook back with Wendy! Oh, and maybe her family, too :) That I will leave up to your muse.
person DDMalfoy
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had been reading this story, and its taken you a long time to update, and you leave us here? Gee, thanks.
person pookie
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was such a great story!!!! You can't leave it hanging!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet lord, how could you leave off like this????? Wonderful!!!
person Kira
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, please continue, i want to see what happends, PLEASE!!!!!
person Mizz Kitty
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nonononono! Bad Pan! Go away! You're ruining a boooooooootiful romantic moment here!!!! Gah! Well! Really great! Really, really, REALLY great! Update soon!

huggies
Mizz Kitty
person theaterangela
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, its so touching. Making Hook huma par part of the greatness, so please update.
person ladyrannulf
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaahh!!!! you're just gonna leave it like that!!! no! you must update!!! great stuff!!
person Becky
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello! first time review 4 ur story, which is awesum, if i do say so myself, and of course i do. hee hee. i luv it, u totally seem 2 understand Captain James Hook; and thusly, i applaud u fervently. which brings me 2 the point, please, please, PLEASE continue ur story!!! PLEASE!!! *begs* (being that i am not English and diffently not a gentleman, i can beg if i want). also, one bit of criticism, it would appear that u r making pan in2 a bad, insensitive person. he may b arrogant and insecure at times (ok, a lot), but he is truly sweet and merely a boy, so dont b 2 mean, k? thank u 4 ur amazing story, keep it up!!
~*~Becky~*~
aka: violetemerald11

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