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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool beginning, keep it up!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this wish you would up date it. Its realy funny. If you still need a beta contact me at
Wolfthesnake@aol.com
Wolfthesnake@aol.com
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That really is a bashing of Kiss of Shadows. Not that I'm mad about it or anything. I didn't enjoy Kiss of Shadows that much. Though, I did like Doyle a lot. Anyway, please update soon! this was so freaking hilarious!!!!
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March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Your so-called literary skills are mediocre at best. Pathetic even for a parody, the idea of which I honestly welcomed at first. It is quite funny how individuals who post tons of slightly legible fanfic automatically think that they are true authors."
Definitely agreeing with that. I'm up for a good parody anytime even though I love the series, but I fail to see how yours is amusing at all. It flies all over the place and there's nothing holding anything together. I've read it twice and would read it again to search for some humour but it doesn't deserve it. Good luck with the rest of your story; others like it so you might as well finish it.
Definitely agreeing with that. I'm up for a good parody anytime even though I love the series, but I fail to see how yours is amusing at all. It flies all over the place and there's nothing holding anything together. I've read it twice and would read it again to search for some humour but it doesn't deserve it. Good luck with the rest of your story; others like it so you might as well finish it.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a funny story and I like the way you write, but you really need a beta!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is just too freakin funny. i love LKH's vampire series, but merry gentry's just bugs the crap out of me. half the time i couldn't understand what the character was saying. it still made me laugh.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it's cute, and very funny. Damn original for a parody.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very fun read with individuality. It feels like it should go under original fiction rather than fan - forget parody, this thing has a life of it's own! I enjoyed it and hope to read more on it. I'm rather intrested to see how the parody will come into play, despite loving the MG books.
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your so-called literary skills are mediocre at best. Pathetic even for a parody, the idea of which I honestly welcomed at first. It is quite funny how individuals who post tons of slightly legible fanfic automatically think that they are true authors.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Although I like my Gentry books, I can't get mad because you're funny.
Glad to see someone with skill. I loved
“Been around the block, right?”
“More like I own the block and I’ve got hotels on it.”
Just because it was so in character with Merry, although
I do reserve her right to sleep with whomever she chooses :)
Me, I just think Andias showing up in the books covered in blood
and bits of flesh kicked ass, but that's my kinks twirling themselves out.
Glad to see someone with skill. I loved
“Been around the block, right?”
“More like I own the block and I’ve got hotels on it.”
Just because it was so in character with Merry, although
I do reserve her right to sleep with whomever she chooses :)
Me, I just think Andias showing up in the books covered in blood
and bits of flesh kicked ass, but that's my kinks twirling themselves out.