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love Jason and I feel he has depths that are left unexplored in the books. You wrote this well though the last paragrph could have been a little longer :)

Umm... didn't I read this scene in Blue Moon? I mean, it's a great scene and all, just not terribly original. However, I do think you write very well and I would've liked to read a different nightmare scene for Jason.

Hey hun. I'm sure i read this before but it's good to have a recap. Can't wait for the you-know-what to happen. I'd forgot it'd all be in Anita's POV. Always is though. Love the website too. Must do something about mine some day. *sigh*

*sigh* just what i needed. lovely. thank you so much. poor jason. the only critique i have is that it was a lot like that scene in the book. i think if you expanded on it, it could be much better. make it your own, add your own scenes and thoughts in it. are you going to continue it? i would love to see more, especially the part with nathaniel and jason. yummy. more please. i want some more. :D

Good start! I like the cliffhanger. It's a great way to build tention. I can't wait for more. Keep writing!