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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really liked the idea.
p.s. think AFF messed up your puncuation.
p.s. think AFF messed up your puncuation.
schedule
September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo sorry, but ya need more, you need it NOW! can't say if it's good or not, yet...but it was ok...but what was with all the ?'s?They got really annoying...^_^
schedule
August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My.
Goddess.
I couldn't tear myself away! Please don't stop writing! I want to read more of it!!!! *glomphugsnish*
Goddess.
I couldn't tear myself away! Please don't stop writing! I want to read more of it!!!! *glomphugsnish*
schedule
May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is actually quite good, although you have some...odd formatting? I think you tried to use html tags, and so at the end of each sentance, you have, it goes like this. ? Always a question mark after every sentance.? So even though the story is very good, or at least very promising, it get's rather annoying to try and read it. You see? ^_^ Anyway, if you correct (al (also, there are some incompleted html codes dotted around the story), it'll be really, really interesting. I look forward to further chapters.
schedule
May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*BLINKS* WOah! That was different. I can't wait to see what happens next. *squeals with delight*
schedule
May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This ranks up there with Entwined. I look forward to the next chapter...by the way I COMMAND YOU TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR I AM YOUR PRINCESS!!!