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Woot! Update. I remember readng this way back when, and I never thought to look back in on it. Rock on for posting another chapter. I hope to see what happens in the end. ^_^

This story is lovely. You mirror the style of the book extrordinarily, and you keep innocence in your work which i feel is important in a story like this. After all, peter is innocent, no matter how heartless, or arrogant he seems. Its an amazing concept and im glad that i read it. You are a very talented writer, and i hope that you continue writing.

Wow ...

Your story, beyond being extremely well written, is amazing. I am very interested in how the plot will fall together.

A bit confusing but still pretty good.

April twenty-third was a very very long time ago. If the story is nearly finished, finish it. Because it has gotten annoying, finding good stories that are wonderfully well written and have a lovely plot and then to find they were updated months upon months ago. Do not do that. If you must, don't post a story until you have it finished and all the other chapters lie in wait. This way writers block, school and work are not problems to the posting process.
I do apologize for the ranting, but you must understand it is because I love this story. You weave the world perfectly, the descriptions are priceless and the wonderful inoccence of it all. This whole thing is beautiful. I am insanely jealous of your ability to write.

awesome story!! SO inventive! I liked peter pan before but i really like it now! Great Job!

Really liking this, can't wait to see how it ends.

This was an interesting story, I did enjoy it, thankyou for taking the time to write it out for us. I especially like your descriptions of things, their wondrous. Keep up the great work,

- Hobbit

*ahem* they're *grin*

cool more please