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Yummmmm...*grin* Wicked ending; keep up the great work!

That was /lovely/! I've always wanted to see Karal with a guy, preferably Firesong, Silverfox or Andesha...*g*...this fic is like my wishes come true!
I wasn't aniticipating a threesome in the end, but it was /delicious/!
You would need to work on you spelling though (for one thing, I'm pretty sure it's "ashke", not "akashe"...and I'm positive that "Kestra'charen" is spelt wrongly)...maybe a beta?
Anyway, as I've said before, I loved the fic...there's too little Mercedes Lackey SLASH...*pouts*
Cheers,
chibi

perfect ending

Oooh, hot-I loves me some Silverfox and Firesong! And Karal is hot-does anyone else picture him as Noah Wyle?

However, be careful-I know for a fact that Misty only allows fan fiction in 'zines and then only after signing a release form. (After a big problem Marion Zimmer Bradley had when a fan sued and a book was unable to be published as a result. So Lackey and a bunch of other writers now have a bunch of legal issues with it. Doesn't that suck?)

Ah yes! I have found this story again :) I believe I had read it on ff.net before they banned nc-17 stories. The only difference now is, that I have read the mage storms trilogy and actually know who Kais. is. I really love the story.

There is just one flaw in this all...Karal is blind!

*super-uber-happy glomp* Thank you so much!!!!!! I just finished reading your trilogy! I am so happy to see Valdemaran fanfiction up here. I enjoyed your stories thoroughly, especially the hot and sweaty pool scene. Very nice...*wanders off daydreaming about Silverfox, Firesong, and Karal*