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for Seven Ways To Hell

by Nevoreiel

schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that first review is one of the funniest I've read. Definitely the funniest on a panfic XD
But, mm.. yes. Hook being so non-apologetic is still delicious, after all this time...
person Soucree
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite good, more a piece of art than a short story. Complete the way it is and perfectly done.

While reading this, I was listening to A.F.I.'s "Catch A Hot One," which is terribly fitting...

"Let's tap your heart so we can paint the walls
and see if anybodyes tes the tone or the pain.
The hungry eyes waiting for life flash, now they're gonna see it.

"Open your veins so we can make a pool and bathe
and see if anyone complains of the stain.
Let's strip you down so we can see you old scars.
Now you're gonna feel it.
Show me how to shine now.

"Have you ever turned to dust?
I saw an insect learn to fly; its form was scorned.
Have you ever seen the kingdom of the flys?
I saw it stay in sovereignty.
Have you lost the sense of touch?
Have you ever turned to dust?

"Let's lift you up so we can see how fast
you fall. We always thought that you could fly; now you'll crawl.
The lack of loyalty you thought you once felt, now you're
gonna feel it. Now show me how to shine."
person HoneyB
schedule August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The one good thing about this is that it's well-written. Very well-written.

But you *are* a sick, perverted fuck, and you *are* going urn urn in Hell if it exists. It horrifies me that people cake ake an innocent story and twist it into pedophilia and murder. You might want to visit a psychologist, because there's something quite wrong with your mental state.

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