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by Sabriel0405

person Johanna
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If anita's been taking the pill regularly since the days that she missed, with Jason, then isn't the baby going to be hurt?
person Johanna
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! A new chapter. And wow, WHAT a chapter it was.
Don't let rough sex hurt the baby, dear. Of course,
Anita has that preternatural strength, I'm sure the
little girl will be fine. More soon, please!
And I love that so many love this baby. What
a lucky baby it is. Good Job, and keep going!
person Kel
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooh, I LOVE this story! You're keeping everybody in character wonderfully and I like that your story is still realistic. Great job and please update VERY soon!
person Nanz
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My goodness, I suddenly feel very warm.
person Reesa
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I always wondered what Anita would do if pregnate. I did find myself drifting a couple of times, but then I have ds rds running around. Will there be a new monster or situation for this story? I assume so, since there has been 2 murders in town. Please let me know when you have more posted. If you need a beta let me know, although I didn't catch hinghing while I was reading.
person lalaland
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! JC SEX!! MICAH SEX!! well, actually kind of a JC/Anita/Micah sandwich. I think that's the first threesome with those characters I've ever read. Way to go!! It was GREAT.
person Jo
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Hfuckfucking shit, to be eloquent. That was really, really goMaybMaybe just a little bit of grammatical problems,
but the dialogue was lifelike and in the style of LKH, the sex was VERY enticing, and it was just absolutely spec-fucking-tacular.
I had lots of fun with Anita being pregnant, too. You did it just right,totally realistic. Good job.
You did your research, too. I have nothing to complain about, and that's rare, cause I'm picky about my AB:VH stuff.
person Nanz
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very sweet.
What are they going to do about Richard?
person celtpriest
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really LOVING this story! Thank you, and please...write fast!!!!
person Nanz
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad JC took it well.
I wonder what Jason will say?

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