rate_review Reviews

This is one of the best Realms fanfics I've ever seen. It focuses on an actual scene and character interestion instead of a fetish or a joke. I have read it quite a few times over the years.

Oh, lovely. Drizzt had such a goodyshoes attitude towards the orgy in Spine of the World, was it, that's it's nice to see a more explorative interpretation. It fits very well with the style and context of the story, and the relationship between Drizzt and Vierna is quite hot. Nice cumshots, too. I would like to see them reach the fulfillment hinted at chapter 2 in a third one, even if Lloth doesn't look unfavorably upon inbreeding. There could be quite a few other reasons for them to want to keep it a secret.

Great stuff! I'd love to see more chapters - Heck, when I checked it again after so long, I hoped for new chapters!

*Shakes his head*

...Aside from the slightly OOC language, this was well worth the read! I actually found it equally humorous and sexual, not to insult, but that incestual relationships can be a bit of a laugh if you think about it. It was a good read, though. Keep it up!

Excellent story, I always loved Vierna, and hated the shaft Salvatore gave her. The sexual tension between them is killing me .. but the build up seems to be worth it. I would like to see a lil more domination and twists since the Drow are legendary in the perversion (Hell Triel fucks only demons :P)

Keep up the great work !

quite literally the only good forgotten realms fic on aff, and one of the best i've been able to find in any of my searches. Hope you'll keep updating.

Great fic, well written and even a plot. Now we only need the next chapters. Update!

An amazing piece! I hope there's more you have to share, I can definitely say I found this more intrigueing than Mr. Salvatore's early novels. Maybe because of the incest...

Great going on the story so far. I don't mean to nitpick about details concerning cannon but I felt I needed to in this instance. First and foremost, your representation of life and culture in Drow society is nearly completely accurate except for one thing, if you've ever read Races of Faerun you would know that the Drow have been inbreeding for even longer than they have been crossbreeding with the glaubrezu. I also think that Maya is a little out of character but in the books she was such a minor character that she didn't influence much of anything when she did appear. But other than these things you are doing a grand job. Hope to see a new chapter soon.

I like the story when are you going to update