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June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed that very much. it was especially pleasing that i could guess the characters correctly, just from the way you had written it :D
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this certainly did surprise me. I never thought of Darcy and Georgiana's relationship that way, but your story made it credible, at least. The idea of them together doesn't interest me at all, but the way you presented it, the way you wrote it... it draws me back all over again.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear author,
I have to say that I truely loved your story. Beautifully written, easily allowed for the suspension of belief, not to metion the involvement of Mr. Darcy, who is able to melt the panties off of any girl, despite his fictional status. However, I must confess a bit of confusion. As I was made aware by the warning, this piece was to include incest. Yet, at the end, the woman is revealed to be Elizabeth, who was Darcy's wife, not his sister, who is in fact Geogiana. I'm sure you've heard this before, but because I'm such an anal retentive when it comes to keeping characters straight (I'm sorry that I'm such an ass that way), I thought I'd let you know, just in case. I don't know how you feel in regards to books, but I've recently discovered these books that continue the story of Pride and Prejudice. The first is called Mr. Darcy Takes a Wife and the second is called Darcy and Elizabeth. If you find yourself with some free time, I highly recommend these books, despite the slight soap opera-y tones.
Sorry for blathering on so, I tend to be that way. I also tend to write notes in a rather formal way, again, something I just can't seem to help. Sorry about that. Thank you for the wonderful story.
I have to say that I truely loved your story. Beautifully written, easily allowed for the suspension of belief, not to metion the involvement of Mr. Darcy, who is able to melt the panties off of any girl, despite his fictional status. However, I must confess a bit of confusion. As I was made aware by the warning, this piece was to include incest. Yet, at the end, the woman is revealed to be Elizabeth, who was Darcy's wife, not his sister, who is in fact Geogiana. I'm sure you've heard this before, but because I'm such an anal retentive when it comes to keeping characters straight (I'm sorry that I'm such an ass that way), I thought I'd let you know, just in case. I don't know how you feel in regards to books, but I've recently discovered these books that continue the story of Pride and Prejudice. The first is called Mr. Darcy Takes a Wife and the second is called Darcy and Elizabeth. If you find yourself with some free time, I highly recommend these books, despite the slight soap opera-y tones.
Sorry for blathering on so, I tend to be that way. I also tend to write notes in a rather formal way, again, something I just can't seem to help. Sorry about that. Thank you for the wonderful story.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Scratch that. Reread and found that i misunderstood. Sorry about that. Again. To my credit, it is 2 am and I'm a bit loopy. I still recommend those books though.
Again, sorry.
Again, sorry.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap. my hert leapt...literally...in my chest when i found out who the femal was in the end. i had known i was darcy 2 begin with and thought the girl was elizabeth at first but then the characterizattion just dint seem lik elizabeth, but his SISTER?...yikes!
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im confused...
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Wicked!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was Elizabeth! Darn it! Write another fiction featuring her. Please please?
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
creepy. good, but creepy.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally compelling - I got a really sick kick out of this!
Your writing style is fantastic and the mood was great, sexy and dark - pls write more!
Your writing style is fantastic and the mood was great, sexy and dark - pls write more!