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for Besides the Ardeur

by lalaland

person myladymystere
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love stories with Micah and you had his personality very well. It was nice to read Anita making a sexual decision without the influance of the Aduer. Well written. :)
person pinkink
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do Anita's voice very, very well. Stories like yours help make waiting for the next LKH books a little easier. It was serious in some places, but your "fluff" was great. Keep at it!! :)
person Sabriel0405
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I like this version better than the one on pomme de sang. You really capture Anita's ambivalence toward Micah. I am hoping Micah gets more on-stage time in ID because I'd like to see them growing together as a couple. While I love Anita/JC and Anita/JC/Asher, I think that Micah is a good fit for her and has interesting possibilities. Post more, post more!
person gojoba
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're back!! Let's hope adultfanfiction.net keeps working. Nice story!! Good character interactions.
person Nanz
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice.

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