rate_review Reviews

Ha-ha...they made a Peter Jr. hehehe...

Was a good story, but it seemed as though you held back quite a bit on the sex scene. What were you shy when you wrote it? Lol ;p I mean you write a story the way you want, but it would have been more interesting with a little more forplay and detail. *Shrugs her shoulders.* like I said its your story, and I have a perverted mind ^_^ Anyways, it was good and a rated a five because you wrote it pretty well. Goodluck on future storys.