rate_review Reviews

Wow...I loved these books and this was right up there with those. I swear it's like V.C. Andrews did this story too. You have a great talent and this was a perfect ending to these stories. Very well done❤

Just tell me one thing, why are you not the ghostwriter and neiderman is?? Your work is soo soo soo much better than his, and you hit the characterizations so perfectly. I really do wish you were the ghostwriter, I'd probably actually like the 'created by VCA' stories!

Oh my Goodness. That was...good. What the hell... that was GREAT! I know authors like more than that but I really can't say much more. I guess I liked how you analized the story so mater-of-factly. I only read the first book so I am glad to know what happened after that, even if it was more of a summary. I bet I would have liked this version better. I had always noticed how she seemed to think of herself as purer than snow. It was a litte iritating. To see this same story through the eyes of another seeing her flaws. Beautiful, man, just beautiful. Well I guess I had more to say than I thought... Great job keep up the work. And keep that charicter development abilities. That alone can save a bad author but in the hands of a good authour? Gold!

Ahh! I can't believe there's no stories here! When I finish reading the series I will definately start writing Cathy/Chris stories.

I watched the movie for this and it didn't even hint a relationship like tha book did. That story was so....angsty,romantic...I could go on. But thanks for filling in where the book didn't.

Hmm...a summary of the book only with a little more sex. Wow.

I haven't read the books in ages but you got Chris and Cathy's personalities very well from what I recall. Good job. I wish there were more Flowers in the Attic fic out there!

I've read the first two books of this series. I think there's a second one that I haven't seen yet- but will read someday! I read this incredibly long fic straight through because you did a fantastic job of describing the characters and their flaws. Paul really was weak as far as I could tell- and I hated Cathy in the books- the manipulative bitch! You did a wonderful job of portraying them here. I can see where Paul would spy and jack off to their sounds- but him actually watching and instructing seemed a bit OOC to me. Other than that, simple editing would work wonders on the clarity of this fic. Odd misspellings are smattered throughout- "oew" ed" for an example, made it hard to understand the word. Excellent work here

I think you should defiently write more of the story from other pov's. It was good! I would love to see the povs for Carrie, Julian, Jory, Melanie, Bart, etc.

I too, always loved this series and its actually kind of nice to see it through someone elses eyes. This was as nearly as good as the book. I started reading this about 1:30 in the morning and could not stop until I reached the end. Very good read. I too wonder why there are not many stories about this book, it was very contriversal.