rate_review Reviews

aww, he didnt stay with me! *tear*

good story though, but i doubt he was a virgin . . . ^_-

You know, every time I read this I love it. It is so sweet and romantic with a little light bondage for kinkiness ;) Though there are a few gramatical and spelling errors. I think that some information was messed up if you were transitioning it from a program to here.

Wow...someone has fantasies...but it's okay, because don't we all? Except those damned RC shippers...*burns RC shippers!!!!!* But only imagine if a male were to click on your story title...

This is probably going to be your first *real* review, as I am somewhat of an editor and beta-reader, being a Literature student and all. I just wandered into this section of the site out of curiousity, as I've read the novel and recently seen the film.

First off, I'd like to congratulate you on a fairly well-written first fic. It's rare that someone can pull off writing in second person, as more often than not it winds up sounding cliché. However, you've managed to do it quite well, considering you're a first-timer. There are a few tips and pointers I can give you, and if you'd like, you can email me at the address above and I'll give you a full beta on it. There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing too horrible in that department. As far as the smut goes, you've written out a fairly familiar fantasy for pretty much any woman who has seen the film. All I can say is, Gerard Butler makes a very yummy Phantom. :D

At any rate, drop me a line if you want a real beta on your work, I'd be more than willing to give you my opinion and some tips.

Spak

That was hot. Well that and because I spilled steaming hot chocolate on my wrist while I was reading it, but trust me, your story added to the throbbing sensation that pulsated in my hand. Nice work, and I especially like how the reader is tied up with his weapon of death. Really cool touch.

This is really good! It's not often that one comes across stories of this type that make it a personal fantasy for the reader. Since probably every woman who comes here and reads these fics has had a personal fantasy about the Phantom, I think it's well in order. Great job!

Wow, this was really good! The only thing that I see wrong are some spelling errors. You wrote "Quiet" which means to be silent. But you really meant "quite". But please continue writing!

Gawd, that was sexy!!! Sounds like one of my crazy sexy deams I had after seeing the movie. Gerard Butler made one hot Phantom!

Okay this was really cheesy, cliched and semi-badly written. But I have to admit that I have been guilty of a similar fantasy in my head at times... Ah well.... I think we all have....

I could accuse this of being Mary Sue... but since it's in the POV that it is in, I don't think it qualifies. Regardless, it's an okay fic, but needs more work.

OMG! This story was hot! And I just recently saw the film!