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*dances around* you updated! you updated! yeaaaa! continue, continue.

so...you're continuing this, right? *hides the threatening objects behind her back* ...right?

seriously, you're going fine. keep it up.

Don't be discouraged at having very few reviews - on average most stories get one rewiewer for every one hundred hits. Considering those figures, you've got twice as many reviews as most people, ne? Anyways, I like the way this is going. I do, of course, have questions, but what's the point of reading on if you aren't curious about the answers? So I won't ask. However, I do insist that you continue to update, so that in time my questions will be all answered. Ne? Your writing iswonderful.

This was so cute. You have to write more PLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's a great take on the story.

This is a very good revisionist version of the classic tale. It sort of moves Perter Pan closer to LOTR and the classic Greek legend territory. It would make a great version for a movie. Please try to tell more of this type.

Lovely fic, although I'd say to keep the children as innocent as possible throughout this. They are children after all and wouldn't know much of the adult world, let alone a world their parents would keep quiet from them.
I like how you've started out, although I hope that it becomes more detailed as the story evolves. I don't like being left hanging not knowing what they are talking about.
Good luck writing the fic and I hope this review helped!

I like the new twist you gave to the classic Peter Pan tale. You bring in interpretations that have , in all honesty, been nagging at my mind. What if Peter was an elf? Did not Disney portray him with pointed ears? Does not he dress a tad medieval? Glad you know some fey history too, gives the story a kind of "umph." Hope to see some action in the near future =)

i really like this story. what you are doing to the story of peter pan is highly ingenious and oral. al. i know this sounds like a stupid question but is this a peter/wendy story or what. even if it isn't i like it all the same. unless of course its wendy/someone else peter/someone else. ahhh the trials and tribulations of a hopeless romantic