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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue your story!!! I just reread it for the 3rd time and hope to read more soon!
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't intended to real any of these Peter Pan stories, or anything based off of another book; this just caught my eye. I'm glad it did, because it's very good! I'm pretty impressed; you've got a nice writing style, and there are a few errors here and there but that's expected. I'll try to check often for updates! <3 Please continue soon!
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I actually registered just so I could review this story. I think it's absolutely wonderful and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please hurry up with it. This story somewhat reminds me of an original fiction of my own which I have, alas, not yet put on the web. I highly enjoy this story and I can't wait for you to update.
Happy writing and I hope your muse shall always be productive.
Happy writing and I hope your muse shall always be productive.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work! wonderful story.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I loved it! Thank you!!!! Please write more!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure I like the tangent you took with Wendy's brothers. The sub plot in london needs some work.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh! i like this! i can't wait until you update...
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was awesome. please please please write more, and soon! i've been watching this story for a bit and you haven't updated! please don't leave us hanging!!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a bit of odd behavior.......... Nontheless, I love your story so far.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story and starting to get really juicy! I hope to see more chapters soon.
One correction though. You refer to Hook's ship as the Jolly Rancher. It's actually named the Jolly Roger. Jolly Rancher is a fruit flavor candy.
One correction though. You refer to Hook's ship as the Jolly Rancher. It's actually named the Jolly Roger. Jolly Rancher is a fruit flavor candy.