schedule
May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA! Oh man, after reading this fic, I was left... well, not grinning, exactly, but I'm sure there was some kind of expression on my face for the rest of the day. lol. Very entertaining.
I do think you could have taken the 'Seuss-ness' a little further. You did find a bit of a Seuss-like rythm, but it would be fun to see something that really went for it, making it rhyme, or something like that. If you're thinking of writing something else, it'd be an interesting challenge, anyway.
As for 'murred', I for one loved it. I thought it was really unique and interesting. I'm all for making up words, especially when they are sound words. It really sounded to me like the noise a horny Max might make. =) The biggest challenge in writing sex scenes is making it original, and details like that are really important.
I do think you could have taken the 'Seuss-ness' a little further. You did find a bit of a Seuss-like rythm, but it would be fun to see something that really went for it, making it rhyme, or something like that. If you're thinking of writing something else, it'd be an interesting challenge, anyway.
As for 'murred', I for one loved it. I thought it was really unique and interesting. I'm all for making up words, especially when they are sound words. It really sounded to me like the noise a horny Max might make. =) The biggest challenge in writing sex scenes is making it original, and details like that are really important.
schedule
May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh! nice job, but it is a bit creepy. it does explain a lot though
schedule
February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I clicked here looking for humor, maybe a bit of a sick laugh, but nope....That was so serious it was scary....And "Murred" is not a word.