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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To answer your question; YES!! The whole eye/hair color didn't even occur to me until about half way down the page! I think I'm getting it now, but look forward to chapter 2 to see if I'm correct in my assumptions. I love your writing style, very plush and detailed. I hope to be as captivated in chapter 2.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope you are not abandoning this story! I loved the first chapter, long though it was ^_^ It was slightly confusing, but I read it again and then got it ^_^ Please say that there will be more! Please, please, please!
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November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so im guessing a love triangle between hook pan and wendy in the middle of the two....i hope she makes it back to neverland and i cant wait to read more!
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Am I first, then? You have now got me hooked! Of course, I am a Hook fan and love exploring his thoughts and desires...and you've got both him AND Peter thinking of Wendy. Poor Tink in this story... Please oh please be writing more...I can't wait to see when and how Wendy fits in. And how old she will be!!!