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i would like to ask you if you can to pleasemaybe email me i have a question, ummmy email is :
flying_raven_of_paine@yahoo.com

i was hoping you'd let me post this on the Anita Blake PDS arcive prehaps so that we can have it there, if i can i'll create an Acount for you and give you the info...thanks
DaN

umm i was hoping that you may possibly update this story, as it has been here awhile now and i really enjoyed your Jean-Claude/Anita/Asher fic a whole lot, please be willing to enchant me further with more stories,
Thanks,
Setsuka

OMG OMG OMG! That was amazing! I had thought of the three of them going at it since I had read Cerulean Sin but I never dreamed that anyone else had the same thoughts. Dirty Girl. I noticed some errors, but it is only fitting that a writer get into her stories when the become.... well when they get good.

If you were by chance looking for a beta reader, I would be most honored if you would allow me to fill the position for you. I don’t like to toot my own horn, but I do consider myself an avid reader of Ms. Hamilton and I believe I could offer your stories a great deal of extra spunk. Not that you need it but it never hurts right?

I would be more than willing to check you against my knowledge of the books and make sure that all your info was correct and that you didn’t get too caught up in your work. At points in your story it was hard to read because you have a tendency to slur words when things get “action packed”. I also believe that ‘Julianne’ is spelled Julianna, it was one little letter, but it threw me.

Please consider my offer, I would love to work with someone as talented as yourself. Your story was a pleasure.. *grins evilly* Keep up the good work.

Midnight

I love this story you have to go on with it!!!!!!!!!

I really enjoyed this story. Glad to see I wasn't the only one to see what would happen if Anita took that final step. Very well done.

I loved it. I am reading Incubus Dreams right now. But then I have read it 10 or times by now. Please continue I would love to read more about Anita and All Her Men. Please continue. You did a great job with the characters and the story line.

That was... well sweet does not cover it. Well it was fun to read, but you should pay more attention to your writings. You changhed the oint of you from Anita and she to "I".

Anything else was fine. Perhpas you want to add your story to http://www.pommedesang.com/ as well, to grap some more reviews, if you have not done so already.

Toodels
Sara

I liked it.
Will there be more?

[constructive criticism] i like the story idea, but i think you need someone to edit it grammatically for you, no offense meant. it's just that it gets confusing, and it would sound better if you fixed the errors. it's mostly sentence structure and such, but i think it would flow smoother without the errors...don't take this as an insult, i liked the story, i just thought that you might want to consider a beta tester or something? >^^<