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A brilliant look into the world of the origional little mermaid. You hardly ever see fic like this which is really sad. This has everything a person could want. Revenge, hate, great plot, excellent flow. Tons and tons of great action. Over all just a wondeful well done fic. You did a great job and this. Hats off. Just brilliant.

Extermely well done. Great plot, excellent flow. You have done a great job at creating something that is both in the spirt of the book and original. You did a really good job with all aspects of this. A lot of raw emotions, with a lot of compleax thoughts and feelings being played out. This is a great read and I thank you for your time and effort on this.

This story would be alot more enjoyable if you worked on your spelling and grammar in the story.

Your title should say A Mermaid's Rage; and there are other things wrong in the summary like the word Form should be From.