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for The Garden of Heden

by Nixofcyzerra

person twistie
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. It's really sick. But it's SO HILARIOUS. The funny thing is, I write like you. Always humor and always wih those commentary. I can't give criticism cause I'm a big fan of writing humor with the brackets. right on.
person everwanderingsoul
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story's hilarious. Even as a Christian I have to admit that your satyre rocks! Please keep writing! I need to laugh some more!
person casualqwerty
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
twisted but cool, need more to suppress all those years of bible study though ... keep writing 'The NEW&IMPROVED King James Bible'
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love
person Peaches
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... what can I say except that I must be really sick for enjoying that. The story was made all the funnier with you comments. Oh and about the hairless pussy thing; it doesn't necessarily make you have better orgasms but it just looks better when there's no hair down there. I hope you keep up writing!
Love, Peaches
P.S: I was shocked nobody has ever swallowed your cum (I personally love it!)
person zizzle
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as a christian i must say that was pure blasphemy. as a dirty pervert i must say right on.
person milly
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a cool story! please keep updating
person kay
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz keep updatin! i would be crushed if u didnt
person tyu
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dis is a funny story

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