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Brava, Brava, Bravissiva
update this as soon as possible my dear.........

I agree with the first poster....

You really need to work on this. Please avoid writing Mary Sue fics and resorting to the typical POTO cliches. This is really bad. I think for the most part POTO fic readers are Erik/Christine shippers, so any stray from this and you are gonna get shot. Add to that your complete lack of writing ability....

Serioulsy, maybe a course in Grammer and/or Creative writing might be a good step before you post fics online... Just FYI...

I like your story. I'm curious to see where this goes..when are you gonna add more? Interesting addition of a niece to which Erik takes a liking to. Keep more coming!

whoa that was well good your like amazing your story reminds me of my two fics Tempus Fugit and Paint by numbers i love your work you should consider taking up writing as a career your so skilled and talented and basically your the queen of writing POTO stories i wish i was you your brilliant your use of vocabulary your like the best human dictionary in the world maybe you could look at my stories and give me some advice

RT

RAOULSTHONG