rate_review Reviews

Quick note to say that your story is quite good, despite being pounded out in internet cafes surrounded by other people, haha. I know from personal experience what it's like to have no computer of your own, but to still wish to create. Anyway, thanks!

Can you write a story about grown up Meggie and Dustfinger? I really hate reading about young teens with grown men. I think if you age her up and let her be an adult it would be so much better. Say he hasn't seen her in years and now she's grown and he falls in love with her. Could you write that? That would be great. :) I like the way you write but I agree with you in that Meggie as a kid with Dustfinger is just not kosher. (Paul Bettany is hot!)

The only word I can come up with for this is beautiful. Somehow you've managed to get around the squick factor of a 12 year old Meggie and write an incredibly (dare I use the word again?) beautiful and remarkably believable series of encounters between Meggie and Dustfinger. I think a round of applause is called for, don't you?

Honestly, it's a shame you never continued this or wrote your other Meggie/Dustfinger story you had in the works. I would've devoured every word!

OH DAMN YOU.
seriously,
write more
puh
leaze<3
its a great story.
my favorite pairing.
im not usually into minors with adults, but when i read this book i was just like "wow they need to fuck!"
good sotry; continue! :D

i love this pairing, and when i read the book, i found that my heart actually hurt. i wanted them to end up so badly that that was all i could think about, and it felt weird. like, i hated it. i wrote a meggie/dustfinger story too, but it`s not very good so i`m embarrased to post it here. ^^;;;

great, great story.

I loved this story. and if there is hope you will continue it. although i didn't expect it to be sexual... their love seems more of an innocent love but this has certainly changed my mind.

I always did like this story honestly. Have you read her second one? I havnt finished it but from what i do know it's interesting..accept for the fact that dustfingers married..blah..i hope youll consider continueing this.

Right, I was definitely set to be all iffy about this because...well, cause she's TWELVE, dammit! But thinking about it, he's from a medieval-like time, and they did actually marry their daughters off to random men at 11 years old then. Obviously, that doesn't make it right, but I'm glad you took that angle and reminded people of it, because it's easier to understand his thinking.

This was...completely beautiful. I fretted it'd turn out ghastly and utterly grotesque (it's a situation that's certainly got the potential to), but you've managed your subject matter like a total genius and the result is amazing. It makes perfect sense, the way you've written it. I'm off to read the rest...!

Hee,I just read the fourth mini-chapter, and HEY, your writing style's got a lot of zing! Seriously, I lurk about and write on Fanfiction.net, I know what I'm talking about - you definitely shouldn't be fretting or relying on people's positive comments to validate your work, because it's excellent. It's got colour and life. You're capable of presenting a proper storyline or piece with a perfect elegant balance between a character's thoughts and what's actually happening. It hits all the right notes and it's massively readable. I definitely hope you continue to write!

This story is surprisingly (or not so) really good. I didn't actually expect to find any from inkheart, because although it's an extremly good story I don't really know a lot of people that actually have enough guts to write about them.
:) Congrats.
Kat.