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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done!!
It's fascinating to see the personification of the island, or the world itself.
It's fascinating to see the personification of the island, or the world itself.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY interresting!!! i enjoyed reading that,
cya
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cya
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow how could you say you are not a very good writer that was absolutely beautiful..........very very very good.......great job
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I really like this one. Although I asumed the 'fickle mistress' was Tinkerbell.
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is quite an impressive approach, and one that works highly well. This entire thing is so well formulated, and so well written that I can actually hear the betrayal in Hook's voice. Well done! - R.H.J.
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Fic, I truly enjoyed this. You were very creative writing this story. I must admit I thought you ment Wendy, then I could see it was Neverland. How creative. Thanks for posting this.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
somewhat sad, but definately thought provoking. I do like your style, and would be interested in seeing you tackle something a little longer. I def liked the short fic tho!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. And I think it's quite clear who the fickle mistress is. :-)
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is quite an interesting prequel... I love when people see (and write about!) the core similarities between the supposed opposites of Hook and Pan. Kudos, and hope to see more from you!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! It truly is a wonderful idea, very surreal, to think of the island itself choosing to replace the key players. It is both beautiful, to think of the magic and soul, contained in the island, and sad to think of how much of a betrayal it would be to Pan, to be defeated not by any enemy but by, basically, his own mother. Rather sounds like some of the old legends of the gods and goddesses...I love it! I really hope to read more! :)