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October 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, just amazing! I enjoyed it very much, bravo!
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was excellent! What a wonderful couple, so perfectly matched and you managed to show their utter absorption in each other after a hair-raising chase, where the reader hopes she'll get away. It's so cute because the reader is the ONLY one who hopes she escapes. What a lovely one-shot story. and you write so beautifully with your word images that I feel like I'm running in the forest, too.
Thanks for the terrific tale!
Thanks for the terrific tale!
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this! :)
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job---a lot of edge of your seat drama packed into a short fiction--very nicely done!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
REally good story!!!
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really awesome. I thought she was going to get killed and then it turned into this awesome lil game. dude *looks around* I want a man to chase me!! lol write more! PLEASE
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! This is the best story ever! I'm still giggling.
~The Black Rose Eglantine
~The Black Rose Eglantine
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I´m glad my feedback concerning your story ´I promise´gave you enough happy thoughts to be lifted in the air. And I assure you, that was I to tell you my opinion of this little one here , you´d be stuck there a few moments longer! ;)
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, absolutely loved it.