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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i have to say that was good im going to read the rest of your storys and i'll tell you what i think of thim too
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was terrific. Your prose was eloquent and evocative. The thrill of the chase quite simply and completely flip-flopped with the reality of it being foreplay.
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Most enjoyable! I love playful little stories like this, I'm only sorry I didn't read it sooner!
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! I loved it.
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was cute!
Just a few grammatical errors to clean up, but it didn't hurt my enjoyment of the story, Good Job!
Just a few grammatical errors to clean up, but it didn't hurt my enjoyment of the story, Good Job!
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable. I liked the imagery you used with scents.
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it .It was a great story. I hope to read more like it. I love Wendy and Captain Hook stories.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a wonderful story! I thoroughly enjoyed it! A very unique and original way of writing. I very much enjoy your Wendy/Hook fics. I like it that you make Wendy a willing party in her capture and seduction. :) Please do write more soon!