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I love this. I absolutely love this! *claws desperately* Pleasepleasepleasepleaaaasseee get the next chapter out as soon as possible ;___; I love your fic, and I love you ;w;

To quote Mr. Wonka, "Wow!"

I must admit, I had my doubts about reading this story, as I normally try to stay away from minor. But this story is excellent! You portray everything in a very life-like way (I laughed when Wonka was making pancakes 'cause I can just imagine him doing that!) and you didn't make them jump right in the sex. (I do so hope that, when you do, you can let Charlie, ah..."feel around" a bit on Wonka? XP)

I have one word of caution: be careful about the sex. Wonka as portrayed in the movie seemed a very socially inadequate guy. He wouldn't be the type to take control--maybe nudge a bit, but yeah. However, Charlie is young, so he wouldn't either...ah, hell. You'll handle it beautifully, I know it. =)

Update soon!

oh, darn, no more chapters??? it's actually pretty good ^^

wonderful story! Definitely enjoying this. Keep writing. <3

I'm loving the fic so far, though I'd prefer it if Charlie was at least a teenager. Oh well. It's well written, and I can't wait for more! I'm debating on writing a fic between Willy Wonka and a original male character...though having my character hit on him...with wonka eventually giving in. something along those lines anyway. hope you update soon!

I have been reading this for a while...and i'm just now getting around to reviewing. Love it,dear. Keep it up. It's fantasically wonderful ^^.
I love your use of vocabulary a lot. It's very much like the books.

~Corynne
TheGoddessofDeath
Alone-At-Nite (on DA)

Oh my God I was so happy to see a section for Charlie and the Chocolate Factory!! First ficcie read here, and I say it is incredibly great!! I do hope you continue very soon, I want to see more going on!!! *Squeal*

It's certainly odd to put these characters into a sexual situation since Dahl's universe is well-seeped in innocence. Yet you write with a similar prose to the late author that it blends in rather spendidly, even if I am opposed to shouta, particularly when based on realistic characters. That whole Micheal Jackson vibe. LOL
The tune you made reference to is actually entitled 'Twisted Nerve'. Quite a clever piece indeed, certainly unique enough for Wonka to whistle, if not at the very least creepy.

when are you going to update!?? common! dont give up now...your starting a whole new willy wonka fanfic fad!! hahahah pl plz plz update!

hey good story so far! ive never really though about this pairing before, but u write it good and i like it. please continue!