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for The Fury Of Desire

by wolfwynd

person Phantom\'s Christine
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I loved it! Erik (phantom) and Christine forever!!! I have to ask you though, are you basing these characters around the ones in the movie? I absolutely loved Gerard Butler as the Phantom, his performance made me cry! He is the best phantom! He's extremely attractive and I believe he brought a seductive feeling to the role, which was the intent from what i heard and i feel like you brought that to him as well. Bravo!
person redheadedangel
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is exactly what I was looking for! I was so angry with Christine for choosing Raoul but now all's well. Excellent!
person mangamazoku
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like. ^_^ Are you going to write more on this? The ending is very sweet and touching, and an assertive Christine is much more fun to read than a passive one. ^_^ Good job.
person angelgirl
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Love to see more soon!
person angelgirl
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was beautifully written! Update soon please!
person mangamazoku
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, interesting start you're making here. I like the POV your taken with Erik, and so far he seems in charcter, still sulking about the darkness eh? ^_^ Write more, i'm interested to know what exactically the argument between Raoul and Christine was about. Him hitting her however, I just always find so OOC for Raoul, he's a lot of things, but violent is one i'd more likely associate with Erik. ^^; This is not a flame, just a tiny critique. Please write more soon, I look forward to reading more.

=^._.^= MangaMazoku

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