rate_review Reviews

Beautiful story hun!
*Bites'n'Nibbles*

Very nice! Erik sure deserved some action!

I'm not criticizing your writing style or talent, but... how is Erik a virgin sex god? He's never kissed a woman, let alone slept with one.

the phantom is a tenor. other than that it was good.

Loved it. Update soon. That rocked! Erik is so horny. lol! ^_~

All I can say is update soon! ^_^

Don't listen to thoes other shity people. Who cares if they don't like it. I love it. So fuck them. Sorry you other reviewers. But who cares how old you are? Who cares is the author has naver had sex? I know a 10 year old who writes sex sceans. How old are you people? Cause I'm sure your not as old as me. But anyhow. Good fanfic. Update soon. I have to see what happens next!

Hmm...well, I think you're a pretty good writer. If I'm gonna have Erik in a PWP, however, I prefer it to be with Christine, because they at least have some background. I have nothing against OW stories, not at all. In fact, I tend to like them. But, I don't like having no backstory for the character.

The actual smut is a little cliche. I personally find the mood is broken when technical words like "G-spot" or porno words like "Cock" are used, but that is just my personal preference. My advice is edit the wording a little to make it more period and consider giving us a whole story for this character. Doesn't have to be real long, maybe just a few chapters, but it could help a lot, I think. ^_^

This was hot! I hope you will continue.

woah, very nicely done. i really liked this story and hope u might consider making another one. if not this will make a great one shot as well. once again, good job