rate_review Reviews

My gosh, you even managed to bring a so-called smut fic to the level that you display in both of the Artemis Fowl stories. In fact only due the fact that this is a story with explicit sex in it makes it unsuitable for ffnet. otherwise it`d be the perfect conclusion chapter to your first novel and lead on to the second novel. You display only the highest skills of story- writing , I can only sit and stare in awe.

dam you ned to rite another it took me like 1 hour to read and i loves it so WRITE ANOTHER

YES!!!!! It's me again Agi, I followed u here!
Anyway... gr8 story, u described it beautifully!
Colfer must be green with envy, eh?

I really like this. I read this, then read the whole Aztec Incident, then read the first two books of Artemis Fowl (24h with maybe 3 hours of sleep... I just couldn't stop!), and now am going to start the third and have already asked for the last one... And re-read this story. There are some minor differences between how you wrote and how I imagine it would or should have happened, and few minor differences in how you wrote it and what style I would have preferred to read a story in, but this fiction still comes awfully close to catching the magic of the books I have bought. And the magic IN those books... This is Glamorous story in both meanings of the world, this is beutiful and romantic story, and enchanted and magical. Despite that, and despite the erotic tension and events in this story and in Aztec Incident, I appreciate how you managed to build that without using the graphical words that some writers seem to suppose are enough in themselves.

Thank you.

OOOh very good, just the perfect A/H fic

wow! i loved it! I almost died laughing! seriously though, it was super sweet, without getting all mushy and OOC. great job! I think you had a couple of typos, but that was all. I'm deffiantly gona read ur other Atemis fic

i really liked it.....
are you gonna write a "following episode" because it would be nice to know what happens next so...that would be great!

nice fic. i'm gonna remember this one for awhile. lol. i luvd the part with tie not coming off. totally classic. keep up the good work!

That was really good! I never knew an Artemis Fowl fanfic could be that...that intense and that good! Thanks for the great 30 minutes it took me to read it! ^.^

I've just realized one thing as I read this: it's been barely months since I've been allowed to watch PG-13 movies on my own. (well, I've seen loads of Rs too, but YOU KNOW, you get the idea.) Nevertheless, I liked it for the following reasons: 1. there was no rape involved 2. Artemis didn't go out of control 3. they're two humans, boy and girl, who love each other, and they're both over 18. So there's absolutely no reason why they shouldn't shag.
But I'm not going near NC-17s for quite a while. I don't find them interesting......