rate_review Reviews

if this is as good as the aztec incident i'm definately reading your story in september!Not to mushy and belivable your stories are. Yoda

AHGH! LOVED IT! I read the whole thing on fanfiction.net too! I'm totaly in love with your writing! Keep it up!

~Kikue-chan~

Nice.......

This is as goos...scratch...better than i expected it to be...lol. BYE NoW!

Oooh, I like the build up. Very ... well, I suppose erotic isn't entirely out of place in this website.

That is a very interesting datum.

Are you saying Arty has a fetish for shagging women in authority?

Agi, just a friendly thing - it's very disconcerting to read this and be jolted when you refer to the nether regions as 'down there' or other phrases. At the very least, it would not be so jolting if you used clinical terms for the male/female netherregions.

Oh my. Holly's going to be a virgin EVERY time they make love?

Arty's a real man indeed ... can't he handle a few scratches and bites?

We do have a tendancy to fall asleep after having sex ... *blushes*

I don't get the ending. Sorry.

VERY good! I love it!

:D Glad to see it finally came out! I think it looks a bit different, but still fantastic! Very sweet. Any chance of seeing Holly's diary?
Yours until vampires turn vegetarian,
~VampirePeaches~