rate_review Reviews

just one word: perfect. The best DL slash fic I've ever read.

BTW, I've painted THIS (http://lua.xibal.org/misc/duel.jpg) much thinking of your story.

Beautifully done! You portrayed both Raistlin and Dalamar to perfection... What a taut, unnerving and incredibly well-written tale!

Yess! After spending months sifting through dead links and immature crap I find some well written, in character, hot R/D slash. I read Raistlin's Return and was also impressed. A slash relationship between Raistlin and Dalamar was always going to be dark, visceral and destructive. I have always thought that it should have a strong s/m, master/slave dynamic. Thank you for exploring these themes and writing a really enjoyable tale. Please keep doing what you keep doing. Varyalle.

Ok, though that certain big fanfiction site never shows email adresses in reviews I had to go and search for myself. But thanks to google, I found this first part of the story inspite of that. And ooh yes, that's very, very much NC-17... My oh my... I turned red while reading this. But the psychology is still captivating. Very nice.
But, being a member of the ESGAME-Team, this inspires me to another therapy session, you know. ;) LOL
I usually don't cry for sequels, but in that case I would gladly read more about how this strange relationship develops, regardless whether its "adult" or not.

Hope we'll be seeing soon how Raistlin's going to use those few days with his apprentice before leaving ;-)