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person JazzyJess
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I have enjoyed your story tremendously! Your characterizations of the Wendy and Hook are very believable and have drawn me completely into your story. I also appreciate that you're taking the time to develop the relationship between the two. While I enjoy PWPs from time to time, I find stories that take time for character development and relationship development to be more entertaining and end up on my read over list! Keep on writing - you've got great talent! - Jessie
person EmZ
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i like this! I hope you will move it along a bit more quicly thougH!

could u drop me an email when you update please?
person randomredsleep
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know that once left to sit, stories are often more difficult to continue, but I would like to encourage you with saying that this story is indeed worth continuing, if you are indeed even still engaged in this site. I am anxious for more.
person jenniferr68
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please complete this story. I have been looking forward to the next chapter, the story is that good.
person ljasell
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, good beginning. It has been a month since your last chapter. I hope you will update soon.
I'd like to see the romance progress.
person pegasus2704
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story! I love the detail that you pour into every chapter. I like how Hook remains tormented, instead of simply falling for her. You portray his struggle well, which contrasts nicely with her feminine, yet spirited nature. Please continue, I am enjoying this very much!

Meg
person Amber
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I LOVE this story! I love your characterization, I love the style, I love plot. Just...everything. I really appreciate that you're not rushing the story, just letting it go at its own pace. You've done a great job in combining the book characters with the movie versions, while adding your own spin on things. I see them that way myself, so it's just...lovely. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. :D
person pookie
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute, please continue!
person mpavsweet
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great so far, update soon plz.. :)
person pookie
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Keep it up and good luck on your papers.

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