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person lilly
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work. i loved the chapter please continue.
person Jane
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for Captain Hook and Wendy to meet!
person dancingsalome
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your Hook is lovely, and I so look forward to the next chaper. Well, perhaps lovely isn't the right word... :-)
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written. It will be interesting to see how the story will unfold.
person pegasus2704
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you have read my story, then you probably know that I am a big fan of Hook/Wendy, especially when dealing with an older, more mature Wendy who is opposed to the idea of societal boundaries. I love how you take your time in developing her character, and are not rushing to get to the juicy parts. It reads like a novel, which is a definate compliment to your writing abilities. Please continue, I love it!

Megs
person pookie
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter, loved it! But please don't tell me this is going to turn into one of those stories where he tortures her to no end.
person lilly
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can not wait to read more. please continue. I love Captain Hook and Wendy stories.
person Slytherin_Tiger
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm just loving this story so very well writin' you can just see all the imagery in your mind
so groovey!

P.S. update soon!
person Slytherin_Tiger
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far update soon!
person Thunder Rose
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love stories with a "strong" Wendy and this looks like one. A very good beginning, I look forward reading more!

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