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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story actually has promise,
Run a spell check, though. Words were mispelled, the grammar was off, and you switched from present tense to past tense often. Marco and Ax were a bit off-character, especially Marco. He doesn't use cliche's like "Dude" and "man" in everything he says.
-The Steel Angel
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Post MORE! I am addicted
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chesire-like grin* I liked this chapter. I hope to see another update... :D
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HMMMM!
Not bad. Sounds like it is going to be really good. Hope you update soon. I would really like to know what happens.
Ax is my favourite character.
Not bad. Sounds like it is going to be really good. Hope you update soon. I would really like to know what happens.
Ax is my favourite character.