rate_review Reviews

Don't pay any heed to those that say you should stop posting.
This is an actul possibility in th Forgatton Realms, even if R.A.S. won't write it. There arehalf-orcs in the Realms, so yes' orcs do rape human females.

Antother thing is the culture of Orcs= the females are to be totally subservient to the males. That is echoed in the Orc gods. There is only one ork goddess( as far as I know of & thats coming from a Realms book= Faiths & Pantheons) Luthic is the wife fo grumish , her portfolio contains= caves, orc females, home, wisdom, fertility,healing and SEVITUDE.

Thou hast caught my intrest. Update, I command thee

This is really good! You should post the rest of.

I agree with you about the classical rescuse of Cattie-Brie, it was so predictalby boring so its nice to see an alternate view on what happened

I had to have a debate with myself before I could decide if I should review this or not.That being said, this is the most revolting thing I have ever read in my entire life! And yet I read it all, so what does that say about me?*shakes head* Anyhoo, you mentioned character devopement in later chapters? I am curious as to what kind of development will happen after a scene like that. If you are inclined to post more chapters, I might be inclined to read them. Unless future chapter involve her raising little half-orc babies. In that case, please consign this to wherever crap goes after you've hit the delete button.

wow, what a story ... Are there more chapters to come?