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for When the Moon Rises

by ozumasgirl

person Vicki
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad..... Liked it though
person Em
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was sad, but arousing do write more
person Aurora Moon
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good.... although I feel sad for that boy...That Olaf, I can't help but hate him more than ever.

You did a good job of depicting the characters, and the scenes were written very good. So I think you pass as a rather good writer.. so that's what really counts, even if not many people would like this sort of thing..

I usually don't go for rape stories, they're not my cup of tea but for some reason I just had to read this. ^^;;
person Nny11
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you were able to use this site for your fic! And it's still as good as I remeber it.
person Lena
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was brillant, I read this on fanfiction.net, where you cut out the graphic parts, and I thought it was brillant then. Now it is a work of art! Not many writers can write such details and make it sound good, without grossing the readers out, but you had a fine balance and you let your readers feel sympathy for Klaus. I love it! You are brillant!
person Mena
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya, I'm not really into slashiness much so I didn't read all of the slashy bits but I wanted to encourage you and let you know your writing is good and also I'm glad you wrote an ASOUE fic because there's just not enough of them here and it's always good to see something fresh and new. I hope you will continue writing:) This is very good for a first fic.

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