rate_review Reviews

mmm, this was the best one yet. I loved the slow build up...the anticipation...the attention to details, to sound...and Peter's masochistic side, iinteresting! I like how perfectly mischievous he is, and Hook too. Very in character for them. <3!

Holy sweet Jesus...

Bloody HELL!!!

Jesus Christ all Fucking Mighty!!!!

Mother of GOD!!

FUCK!!

...Okay, now that I've got that out of my system, I can praise you properly.

HOLY SHIT I'VE NEVER READ ANYTHING LIKE THIS IT'S SO RAW AND ANIMALISTIC ABSOLUTELY PURE RAW EMOTION I CAN'T BELIEVE I'M SO LUCKY TO READ THIS I LOVE THIS PAIRING IT'S PERFECTLY IN CHARACTER WITH THE BOOK MAYBE NOT THE MOVIE BUT THAT'S THE MOVIE'S FAULT FOR NOT KEEPING THE ESSCENCE OF THE BOOK IT'S SO DIRTY AND PERFECT AND SMUTTY AND I CAN'T BELIEVE I'M STILL ABLE TO TALK AND I WISH THERE WERE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS BECAUSE IT'S SO HOT AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS AND YOU SHOULD DEFINITELY THINK OF WRITING MORE CHAPTERS OF THEIR MEETINGS OH MY GOD I CAN'T BREATHE!!

*gasps for breath*

Ehem, seriously, though, you should definitely continue this if you can. Essopretty!!

I gotta go now...

Toodles!!

Yer such a good writterer! Fliziziz

Oh, HOT. Hot hot yummy hot. Mm. Can you see me licking my lips? I want some rum. *g*

Delightfully DIRTY!!!

Very nice.
I have no other words.