rate_review Reviews

As you can see, I'm currently reading all of your fics. Muahaha, I loved this one's ending. His personality was so on cue..You are a genius.

Rather unusual but I liked it. I personally thought Wonka might do something to Violet in return after she sucked him off but it's still a pretty good story.

Odd combo of the two movies, like Wilder movie but with the Depp Wonka in it. A rather OOC Depp Wonka I'd say, Wilder Wonka seems much more the pedophile type to me as Depp Wonka seems rather asexual and uninterested in the children. However, it's well written and funny.

LOL! Oh if only real come was chocolate... men would walk around so much happier. That's like the ultimate fantasy... yum!
Loved the story and realized I had not reviewed it. So here I am. Again, I love the crossing of taboos.

I don't understand anyone who would come to a Willy Wonka fanfic section on an adult website and be shocked to see child/adult sex. Give me a break. Obviously they've never delved into HarryPotterfics. Now there's some twisted shit. And those people aren't even appealing! Sheesh.

Oh... ok... maybe Willy should have brought Violet's mom into the closet or Grandpa Joe. I bet Mrs. Gloop would have given really good head or maybe he could have just fucked her up her fat ass.

OF COURSE WILLY IS GOING TO BE WITH A CHILD...HE'S A CHILD HIMSELF! Well, there is some arrested development going on there, somewhere. Of course he's most viable with Charlie...*hint*smile*roll eyes*hint*

Enough rant...

This was well written, as are all your stories. I loved the little twists and turns and details that are so true to even the most minor canon characters.

Pedophile crap... This is disgustingly realistic... A *child*, you sicko...

Mmmmm... :) I just adore stories like this to endulge my inner sicko! Letting loose ideas like this in our fantasy world is what keeps all the REAL kids safe. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your portrayal of Wonka is delicious, even though I STILL kept imagining the Gene Wilder Wonka... maybe because it seems like you kept all of the aspects of the older film besides Mr. Wonka himself.

More Wonka please.... have you tried your hand at Wonka/Charlie?

lol....I wish I were Violet.....with Depp willy wonka..*dirty thought *dirty thought*

Wow, he has no shame! Hehe... good job on this!

Yay more Willy Wonka fanfiction! *Ish on a hunt* ^^;; heh heh.....

Anyway, I really liked your story. I am a little in agreement with a few other reviewers on the "disturbingly pleasant" part but only a little. I overall really enjoyed it, and I thought you did an excellent job on portraying their personalities very well. The plot was written nicely, and I completely agree with the one reviewer who mentioned how Wonka would have issues living in seclusion for so long and needed some...gratification..<< The chocolate part amused me too, I did not see that coming lol. And I found your statement, "She was preferrable to Varuka, but still a Class A Gimme-Gimme brat" to be so dead on target.

An excellent piece of work. I hope you create more ^_^

I agree with a previous reveiwer "disturbingly pleasant" It was very obvious to me that Wonka in the fic was not meant to be human. I mean his eyes turned pink for goodness sake XD.
It was written very well ^^.