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dude, that was messed up, an 11 year old...oh well all is good and well though. I couldn't resist reading it if it had wonka in it...doing...things...if you catch my drift*wink wink* anyways, it was well written keep up the good work! bye! ^_^

This was disturbingly pleasant. I'm usually not into adult/child sexual incounters... but... that was just hot. I would have loved to have been Violet there.

I liked this for a number of reasons. One, your characterization of Wonka was dead on. I mean, the guy's got a few issues, and isn't quite aware of what is and is not socially acceptable because he's been locked away for so many years. Plus, any man would want a little 'gratification"...especially a lonely recluse. >_> The chocolate bit at the end amused me, and it's not like this was poorly written (AKA "he shuved his cok in vilet's mouth") So don't listen to the close-minded bastards who say it sucked. I can totally see it happening.

Ewww first dog molestation now Child Molestation,i know Johnny Depp's hott but....your sick.

Mabye it would have worked better if she was atleast a teenager.

UMM OK...
Your right about one thing though.
Shes a class a GIMMIE-GIMMIE BRAT.

Hey, i reconize your name from the Whangdoodles community, i think! ^^

This was so awesome, particualrly the end! Who would have thought Wonka would taste like chocolate as well!?! ^___^

Um..........yeah.