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for Beautiful Girl

by cravache

person Madeleine
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Daring and disturbing! Wonderful writing!
person KITTY
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OKAY WTF?
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats really sad :(
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its obvisously a sad story not an erotic one, and its not like she enjoys it. so why have such negative comments! i thought the writing was terrific
person PRoyalAngel2007
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's very interesting. All this time I thought that it was Peter who did that, but I was wrong. Gosh. Haven't u guys heard of freedom of speech. *sigh* It just pissed me off how people would comment such nasty words.
person amaria
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well written,i have always had the thought that in the film the same actor plays wendys father and hook and how long it would take people to begin to play on that fact.
person jora
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was.....kinda fucked up.
person The Nerd
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, it was so creepy! good job. nice twist ending.
person loveangelLi
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!! I TOTALLY wasn't expecting that!!
person disgusted and apologetic
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just read the review by the first reader. if this was meant to be a story about how children don't like getting molested, as first reader suggests, then good for you.

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