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oh my god!!!!! do you have any idea what this does to a virgin and one that is in love with Erik! yes continue!

Finally! Someone who wrote a fic on AFF.net that is not about the movie! Thank you for making my night. I am very happy to read some kay fanfic on here. I enjoy when you have set your story. I think that if you are going to write another woman fic where Erik is concerned, it has to be before Christine shows up. I really like how you have started, and how you have developed your plot from the commune. Erik seems to be a little OOC for me, but then again I like to follow more of a Leroux interpretation in my head with a touch of kay. I like where your story is going so far, however I think that you may be moving a little too fast. If it were me writting this, I think I would use this as a good start, but then go back and revise the characters and develope them a little more. Also, and I know this is a small little thing, but Madame Butterfly didn't premier untill 1904, Puccini (1858-1924) I don't think was writting Madame Butterfly during the Commune (1870?1871? IDK) Anyway, I don't mean to sound like a harsh critic, I just wanted to try and give you some feedback on your story so far. I know that when I write it is helpful to me. If you would like, we can talk more about your stories and what not over email. I am lot666chandelier@yahoo.com (yes, like the stage show) also, I want to know if you have a beta reader, or would like one. I would love to get involved in some fan fic beta reading and would be more than happy to do it for you.

All the best,

~MmeMarie

i like this. of course, that could just be because the i'm in love with gerard butler--who IS the phantom to me--and you used my name...woohoo! i'm excited to see what happens next...are they gonna do it? :P cuz then it'd be like me doing gerry butler and i have to tell you i've got no problem with that...