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I love how well you've written this so far please write moreI am dying to see how it ends up.

oh this is a great start, can't wait to read more.....though a few more spaces between paragraphs would be nice. ANyway GREAT STORY, please please please update soon!

hmmmmm, interesting, someone finally caught Edward......hmmmm now I have to wait to see where you go from here. Good so far, pretty damned good, now I just hope you update soon, I like this story, and so does Inuyisha who told me about it....now if you could just update before she takes it out on me, I'll be happy. She is not the most patient person in the world.....or the gentlest.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Nice, very nice, my friends were right, it is very well written and a good first chapter, now please update.

Interesting, now, please update, so I can read more and get a better understanding of your story.

Um....o.k. you may want to put some more spaces between paragraphs so that it's easier to read....but other than that the story itself was great, I just dislike cliffies....so if you update soon my one dislike should be taken care of.....and I just love how Anita, Anita is!

Wow, this is a great story. I cant wait to see more of it. Wow something that can take down edward?! keep up the great work