rate_review Reviews

That was great! lol i loved it! I was so impressed at finding a Willy/OC story and i was not disappointed either. GREAT JOB!

Well, i wrote it in a way so Victoria could be whatever kind of girl you want- or at least i tried. So she really doesn't have a definate age or anything like that. Personally i imagine her as somthing between the ages of 17-21. :S

And lets just be happy a kid didn't find the golden condom, anon! i'm afraid the plot just falls apart when you think of it that way, so don't think of it that way! xD

Everyone, thanks so much for the reviews! For now this is just a one-shot, but after tonight (Omg, the movie came out today!) i might be in the mood to write some more! ^__^ ~<3 Hugs & Kisses & Scrumdillyumtious Bars!

I know this seems kind of awkward, but 'aww!'
That was so Wonka-esque!! I think you should do another chapter.. That was so freakishly.. sexy...
Uhh.. I go now.

Great work!

That was awsome,great sory,good effort.

"What if a child found the golden condom ehh? Than hed be in alot of trouble"
I forgot to ask,how old was Victoria anyway?

The hell?!
What if a child found the golden condom ehh? Than hed be in alot of trouble.

Great story I enjoyed.
I call for a sequel!
Great work! Keep it up!

Very good! Will you be writing more?

It was a wonderful story, and I don't think I could have written a better one myself. Nice setup, interesting, and it was short enough that I didn't get bored at any point. The only thing I can fault it for is that the transition to the foreplay was very abrupt. Possibly adding a few more lines in there could make it smoother, but overall, I enjoyed it immensely! Thanks for writing it. =-)

Wow, I laughed quite a lot at this, actually!

I seriously laughed when I read this line: "The chocolate bed began to rock slowly, assisting with their motion as Willy began to thrust slowly in and out"

Thanks! Brilliant!