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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually, it was pretty well done. It would have helped if you'd either established the protagonist as either a British immigrant or chosen to use more American colloquialisms. For the most part, it was excellently written, and I enjoyed it. I would like to find out what happens next.
Danny
Danny
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute and totally in keeping with the Anitaverse. I absolutly loved the ending and the blood-to-go.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Normally Original Character stories I avoid... but I gave this a chance and I'm glad, it was a cute read! Absolutely an adorable side story about a human and how they might meet a decent Vampire. *gives you Jean Claude and Asher shaped cookies*
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a genious.
I have not laughed so hard in ages, i had a crap ass day(due to a "hands" man) and your funny story has been the only bright spot all day.
Thank you for your brilliant sence of humor and don't stop writing or i may cry. ; )
I have not laughed so hard in ages, i had a crap ass day(due to a "hands" man) and your funny story has been the only bright spot all day.
Thank you for your brilliant sence of humor and don't stop writing or i may cry. ; )
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brillant. i love it. the perfect combination of cynicism, modern hardships, and fantasy, with just a dash of plausible realism. great going!
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing hysterically* I LOVED IT!!!!!!!! This was really too funny, even if it was taking something that could really happen...now...must go see what else you've written that's good..
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! More would be good.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOWZERS!! that is totally unique and very interesting. I LIKE IT! Please add more soon. I know you said you don't know where it came from, but go back and get more!! UPDATE!!!! :D