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for Angel In Hell

by Pasque

person Blackrosephantom
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=Da killer, posing as da sexy Phantom, stalks da Parisian streets in search for a new victim...
in search for DA AUTHOR OF THIS GREAT TALE FOR NOT CONTINUING IT...
MWAHAHAHAHACKHAIRBALL=
person Blackrosephantom
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
EEP. This story is off to a great start. At first, I thought it might be Erik. But something about didn't seem right. And then this imposter dares to kill a poor prostitute!
That is definitely not Erik. Even in Freddy's version of Erik, he was a gentleman with ladies of the night. Ooo, do continue this story.
person Sass
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. You've got me intrigued :P Plz update soon
person Britt
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... now that's an interesting start. I think I'm hooked! Phantom of the Opera meets.... Jack the Ripper? Schweet. :P

PS: Can I second the motion that you put more break lines in? It would just make it easier for my poor strained eyes to follow. :D Lots of love.
person Koda
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was Erik.

Meanie.

I look forward to chapter two. But, may I suggest more breaklines?

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