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for Sweet Sixteen

by gothicmusings

person kristina
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this was so hot, and clever, and well written, and funny! ;-) Congrats for thinking of a different twist for the e/c story. ;-)
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I bet that creeped the crap outta him. *grins* but she cant be THAT stupid... she knows what the phantom looks like, after all.. hehehe
person julie
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erik deserved it. :)
person Sapphire Artemis
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely beautiful. I had been trawling through archives, looking for just one hetero fic where Christine isn't totally dominated, and gives the Phantom some action. This fic was perfect--it met and surpassed what I had been looking for. Your use of language was excellent--very tasteful. No horrible grammar mistakes, as far as I can tell. Beautiful, beautiful work.
person SashaNL
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was brilliant! I definitely agree with the reviewer that said she would love to have this happen on her 16th birthday. ;D It was hot, but I would have loved to see Christine get off to the Phantom's instructions, by his voice. Please say you have some more fics in store, because this is just too great a story. The scene was plausible, it wasn't filled with horrible euphemisms, and again, it was really hot! Superb job!
person Blackrosephantom
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
O_O
EEP.
Great start.
Please do continue.
person Britt
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh... I'd take that present any day! :D That was really sweet. Please say that it wasn't a one shot. Please?
person Marie
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... yeah. I'm now in need a change of panties.

;)

Loved it!
person Salom�
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome stuff, just awesome! *claps* I look forward to reading more from you. <3
person spikesbint
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you know how much I loved it lol. And of course there had better be a sequel or I know where to find ya!!! ;)

Angela

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