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Quite charming in its way. I do like your Ivan, and his lover Stefan is a fine original character. I agree that it is not easy to write in this fandom.

You might want to do a little copy-editing just to clean it up and make it pretty :)

Ignore ANON. Because the Miles Vorkosigan Series is so hard to write for (Personally, I find anything that is based off a book hard to rewrite and identify Character Personality), as long as you try daringly, anything is reasonable. Very qauint story you have written, and don't let negative reviews bother you. Looking forward for more Miles Vorkosigan Saga Fandom, write sooner, and more.

Araki