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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW..................you have sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gotta write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz? lol, write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great story!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story, I really like it. It has a darker twist to it than the original which is quite interesting. And it's different than everyone else's, it's refreshing. I hope you update soon.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Please Please finish this story!!!! I've excited checked ever week since July to see if it's been updated....just to be crushed. This is a wonderful vivid story please don't let it fall away! It's too enthralling to not know what's going to happen. Plus, I'm loving the roles of the Cheshire Cat, The White Rabbit and The Mad Hatter. I'll bake you some brownies if you update!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, you did well, and Thank goodness Alice isn't some blond bimbo...again...I'm sooo happy that you have some kind of creativety. ^_^ I've only finished the first chapter so far, but I plan on reading more, as soon as I get a day off. Promiss!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow its really good keep up the great work. can't wait to read more. :)
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Greetings Despair,
Ooooo, I love your story! I like how, despite that Alice and Hatter are seen as hideous to the rest of society, they are two good people.
Their costumes are divine. The Hatter turned me on, hehe. He wears a mask, and has soulful eyes, like the Phantom of the Opera. He also reminded me of Jareth, King of the Goblins. When I first heard about the Chesire Cat being the villain, I laughed. A big, fat playful cat playing the villain! Then I read about his description and demeanor, and...whoa...I hate him and desire him. Note: Desire not for him to rape, but to seduce, hehe. Have you read the other Alice tales in which the Hatter is sexy but evil? I don't like how he tortures Wonderland creatures, but I so like how he seduces Alice, hehe. OOOOooo, I love this story. When you can, please resume this dark, delicious tale.
PS...are the Chesire Cat and Hatter brothers?
Ooooo, I love your story! I like how, despite that Alice and Hatter are seen as hideous to the rest of society, they are two good people.
Their costumes are divine. The Hatter turned me on, hehe. He wears a mask, and has soulful eyes, like the Phantom of the Opera. He also reminded me of Jareth, King of the Goblins. When I first heard about the Chesire Cat being the villain, I laughed. A big, fat playful cat playing the villain! Then I read about his description and demeanor, and...whoa...I hate him and desire him. Note: Desire not for him to rape, but to seduce, hehe. Have you read the other Alice tales in which the Hatter is sexy but evil? I don't like how he tortures Wonderland creatures, but I so like how he seduces Alice, hehe. OOOOooo, I love this story. When you can, please resume this dark, delicious tale.
PS...are the Chesire Cat and Hatter brothers?
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT please keep writing
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue, if there is more to come! *fingers crossed*
Even if you have a few teensy weensy spelling errors, this is fab! I mean, the whole setting in general and the story's plot really is good!
Keep up the good work.
x
Even if you have a few teensy weensy spelling errors, this is fab! I mean, the whole setting in general and the story's plot really is good!
Keep up the good work.
x
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Bravo! I can't wait for more ;)