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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So much nervous tension, and fantastic details. Only hoping for more chapters or a sequel.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far, very much like Lolita my favorite book. Please update i wanna see where this is going.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've directly taken that last part from Nabokov's Lolita, haven't you? Tsk tsk. I think that's a little strange.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, well...That's quite lovely. *grins*
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh...this was good...i hope there's more to come....luved it!!!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love how Veruca is a little nyphette in this story! xD And i guess we minas well start calling Wonka Humbert Humbert. ^___^ Really, this was so cute, write more!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! You need to review soon. She seems alot smarter then her father...well considering she plays him like a violin. 'Daddy I want' really gets on my nerves. Don't think me strange when I say I want to read some more Wonka/Veruca fic. Keep writing.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow okey i love how this is going plz update!!!!